What do you think???? opinions???? could this be published? give thoughts! it's short?

It really depends if you want to get paid for it. Poetry is highly subjective. One person can think it's terrible and another could think you're the next Sylvia Plath. Some magazines are selective while others are not. However, even if you're one of the best poets today you'll still probably not get paid well. Money is in books and even then it's difficult to succeed. Sorry to be a downer. The point is you should write because you like it and write because you want to share with others regardless of payment. Good Luck.